WAIT, WAIT, WAIT, WASTE!
WAIT, WAIT, WAIT, WASTE!
Now because of a worldwide disease, foods are becoming still lesser since many countries go to lockdown and people are forced to stay in their homes. (Lyons) What we can do in homes for reducing food other than conserving and eating is to call for other people to start saving and helping the world: let themselves and people enjoy life and foods for a longer period of time. It is true that we cannot stop food waste, but we do have the power to unite our hearts and minds to slow it down and allow food for everyone. One thing that makes us humans special is our capacity of speech, of convincing, persuading, and advertising others. That's also what makes us one.
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Now because of a worldwide disease, foods are becoming still lesser since many countries go to lockdown and people are forced to stay in their homes. (Lyons) What we can do in homes for reducing food other than conserving and eating is to call for other people to start saving and helping the world: let themselves and people enjoy life and foods for a longer period of time. It is true that we cannot stop food waste, but we do have the power to unite our hearts and minds to slow it down and allow food for everyone. One thing that makes us humans special is our capacity of speech, of convincing, persuading, and advertising others. That's also what makes us one.
Keating, Madeline. “Reducing Food Waste: Eight Tips for Home Cooks”. NRDC. Natural Resources Defense Council 2021. 3 June, 2020. Web. 12 March, 2021.
“Reducing Wasted Food At Home”. EPA, United States Environmental Protection Agency. October 29, 2020. Web. 12 March, 2021.
Kate, Lyons. “Cutting Food Waste By a Quarter Would Mean Enough for Everyone, says UN”. The Guardian. Web. 12 March, 2021.
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